Voice/Tone: Throughout the whole story the tone was very mysetrious and thrilling. I had the sense that i was inside this narrators head trying to figure out who his neighbor has.
Audience: i would have to say the audience for this story would have to be people intrested in horror/ thriller stories.
Evidence: I didnt really see alot of evidence in the sense that the story had some research done. Maybe you can do some background research on the time period the story is taking place.
Meaning: it was hard for me to tell what the Thesis or main concept was. I know that the main character is a killer who has schizophrenia, but what about that? Emphesis how that character grows and what the moral of the story is.
Structure: Overall i think the structure was well put, but i got a sense that the story isnt done. I feel left hanging and its a good things, its just that that story should be finished.
Organization: It was well organized, but the only problem there is, is that there is no diolouge, and the characters need more descriptions. If you work on that i think this story would look 10 times better.
Overall Thought: the story has a very well plot, its just needs some interactions between the characters with diolouge. It also need some descriptions. I like where this story is going.
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