Voice/Tone: Ana’s voice was laid back. She informed
in her paper on why people are homeless.
Audience: I think her audience was targeted to young
adults and adults as well. Trying to get her point across to them that being
homeless is a serious issue.
Evidence: Ana did use some resources, but the way it
was used wasn’t used as well as I would’ve have seen it be used. I think She
should have used her information to compare the pros and cons of poverty.
Meaning: The meaning that Ana was trying to say was
that being homeless is serious. She explains what drove people to that point
and did it great.
Structure: the way it was constructed was well. This
paper was suppose to be on the other hand an exploratory essay in which the paper
doesn’t side. I think she did that very well, but she did not inform the reader
the pros and cons of the issue.
Organization: I would have liked for her to not talk
as much about her experience volunteering and rather have used that experience
as a resource to her paper adding to the pros and cons of the issue Ana was
trying to explain.
Overall: overall I think she told the point she was
trying to get across excellent. I want to see more good and bad sides to the
issue she was talking about.
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